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Ficlet: Heat
by Keelywolfe
NC-17

Notes: I wrote this tidbit for the ST kink meme, but eh, I hate anonymous and I hate not having stuff I've done on my own journal. I know, I know, control freak. Also, I can avoid doing other stuff if I just keep writing smut. Yeah. *G*

*Summary under the cut. The movie just came out, I don't wanna spoil!




Summary: The prompt was for Kirk/Spock Prime, in the cave. Doing sex things. Yeah, I can do that. ;)

~~*~~

They'd done this before, a hundred times, Jim's mind insisted. A hundred times hundred, a kaleidoscope of flashing images flaring through his mind's eye. Bare limbs twisted together, mouths hot and sore, and yes, his legs spread and he was...he was...

But they'd done this before, no matter the protests of his body, the surprising shock of pain as Spock pushed roughly inside him, spreading him out on the icy cold ground. Even with both their coats surrounding them slivers of chill seeped in, ghosting over naked skin where their clothes were haphazardly yanked aside. He didn't care; hot hands were cradling his cock with the sureness born of long familiarity.

I did not mean to - almost apologetically, a thought that wasn't his and Jim shook it away, his short nails scraping against the frozen ground as he shoved back into those hard thrusts, the smooth slide of hips against his own and he knew how to move, how to get it deeper, how to get Spock to rub just so against that little spot inside him where pleasure flared like a supernova and he didn't stifle his cry, let it echo through the cave around him because he knew, he knew how much Spock liked to hear him. Any pain now was hidden, masked in growing need and Jim reached between his legs, caught Spock's hand in his and both of them stroked him off together until he came, spilling another brief moment of heat over their combined hands.

Part of him would have loved to collapse down onto the ground but that little niggling sanity that still lingered warned that frostbite of the dick would be most unpleasant. Instead, Jim braced his legs apart and managed to hold them both up, hissing out his discomfort as Spock gathered himself up enough to withdraw. Wetness was creeping down his thighs in bitterly chilly streaks and that was enough to get him moving, stiff as if he were someone much older.

Well. That had been...interesting. He could taste blood on his lip, bitten and sore, and that was another brief spot of warmth before he licked it away, lips chapping almost instantly beneath the thin layer of spit and the too-familiar tang steeled him enough to straighten his clothing before turning back around.

To find Spock watching, a man he barely, no, always knew. He looked a little embarrassed and seeing it made...love? Love, lust, something, anyway, rise up from his middle, steaming through him like an injection of liquid heat.

"Forgive me, I have never..." Spock coughed faintly, "Never had such a reaction before from a mind meld."

"Yeah?" Jim stretched and winced. "Not that I'm complaining, but we should probably get going." The knowledge of what had happened, what needed to happen, was still throbbing foremost in his mind now that it wasn't clouded with the unexpected surge of need/lust/oh, god, fuck me now that had slammed into them both, sent them both to their knees in this freezing cavern.

"Of course," Spock said briskly, moving to straighten his clothes. He hesitated when Jim caught his chilled hands in his own, met Jim's eyes without reservation.

"Next time? I get to fuck you, old friend," Jim smirked and if Spock's grip tightened briefly, eyes flaring hotly, he pretended not to notice. They did, after all, have a planet to save.

-fin
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Date: 2009-05-12 08:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kimberlite.livejournal.com
Oh, I liked how you played the contrast between stranger/lover both emotionally and physically. Very hot. :)

Date: 2009-05-22 12:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I just watched the movie again and that scene is just so...guh. Love it.

Date: 2009-05-12 09:08 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] silentflux
Oh, very hot :) And now we just need Spock's reaction to his older self and Kirk...

Date: 2009-05-22 12:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I can imagine what Spock the youngers reaction will be. ;)

Date: 2009-05-12 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kira-bouviea.livejournal.com
God this had me blushing over at the meme.

Date: 2009-05-22 12:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2009-05-13 12:22 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ix-tab.livejournal.com
.....

YES.

I have been rambling about Spock Prime/Kirk for ages now. It's so awesome to see it realised this hotly.

Date: 2009-05-22 12:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Thank you! That scene in the cave was just so awesome, it deserves lots of stories. :)

Date: 2009-05-13 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sineala.livejournal.com
Oh, wow, this was yours? No wonder it was so awesome!

I hate anonymous too (I just don't get the idea that I'm supposed to be ashamed, you know?), so I might as well 'fess up to being the requester. Hi.

And thanks again; I really loved it. Exactly what I wanted.

Date: 2009-05-22 12:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Oh, wow, this was yours? No wonder it was so awesome!

Aww, thank you! I'm trying to catch up on my comments here and I just wanted to say I'm delighted that you liked it. :)

Date: 2009-05-13 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kateandromeda.livejournal.com
Well, that was interesting. But I am not really sure if Spock overwrote the memory of young Kirk completely, which would be very scary, or Jim can see the difference between old and new memories, but does not care.

Also I see conflict potential between Spock and Spock. That would be an image. ;)

Date: 2009-05-22 12:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Also I see conflict potential between Spock and Spock. That would be an image. ;)

Mmm, yes, it would. Thank you!

Date: 2009-05-13 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparky77.livejournal.com
I wanted that story from the second I saw that scene in the movie. Awesome!

Date: 2009-05-13 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkqueenakasha.livejournal.com
same here. loved the fic

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From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com - Date: 2009-05-22 12:28 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2009-05-13 04:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blucola.livejournal.com
This was great! And really, I can't fault Spock, it's been, what? 40 years since his Kirk died?

Date: 2009-05-22 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
No kidding! If you saw the younger, hotter version of the guy you'd been hitting all that time, I can imagine it would be hard to resist. *G*

Thank you!

Date: 2009-05-13 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrasaki.livejournal.com
Awesome, you've gotten into the Star Trek fandom!

Date: 2009-05-22 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Ahh, yes, I have. I'm doomed. :)

Date: 2009-05-13 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-dragoness.livejournal.com
God, yes. I've been wanting to read Old!Spock/Kirk fic since that scene came up in the theaters.

THANK YOU!

Date: 2009-05-22 12:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Man, wasn't that the greatest scene? I'm dying to see some more fic for it.

Date: 2009-05-13 05:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weehobbit.livejournal.com
Read this earlier today at the meme. So much love for this! <3 I wonder how young Spock will factor into this! xD

Date: 2009-05-22 12:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2009-05-13 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] recumbentgoat.livejournal.com
well hot damn. this was a lot hotter than i expected. but there was real chemistry between them in the movie. and having spock be the much older one is definitely kinky for some reason. lol

Date: 2009-05-22 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Heh, it is a little kinky, somehow. I gotta admit, I like it!

Thank you!

Date: 2009-05-13 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] antychan.livejournal.com
The prompt was for Kirk/Spock Prime, in the cave. Doing sex things. Yeah, I can do that. ;)

LOL, so glad others have had the same instinct! *fans self*

Also, OMG, I found you on LJ!! Remember how you wrote me "The Art of Fucking" when I went on and ON about Harry/Ron? Like, eight years ago? *fails at fandom detox*

Date: 2009-05-22 12:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
ROFL! I don't remember, but I also don't remember what happened last week, so...*G* The story I remember though, ahh, the innocent days of Harry Potter slash. ;)


Date: 2009-05-13 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jtree.livejournal.com
Exactly what I was looking for, thrilled to see it executed this well. Haha! The minute I saw the scene unfold I knew this would have to exist. Many thanks. ^_^

Date: 2009-05-22 12:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
You're very welcome! I loved that scene so much. :)

Date: 2009-05-13 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarren.livejournal.com
Oh, VERY NICE!!!

Date: 2009-05-22 12:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2009-05-15 05:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rushingwind.livejournal.com
I love it! Been looking for Spock Prime/Kirk fic, and this is amazing! :)

Date: 2009-05-22 12:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I loved that scene in the movie to pieces, so I just had to write for it. :)

Date: 2009-05-16 12:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tomato-n-john.livejournal.com
Buenos Dias,

Believe it or not, I went to see the film *this* afternoon because I knew this story was here...waiting.

Both activities were well worth the time! Truly!

Thank you for sharing this gift with all of us.

Con regard,

JD/Tomato/Athena

Date: 2009-05-22 12:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Wasn't the movie just wonderful? I loved it so much!

I'm so happy you liked the story, that scene in the movie just begged for it. :)

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From: [identity profile] tomato-n-john.livejournal.com - Date: 2009-05-25 06:31 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2009-05-20 12:18 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] awarrington.livejournal.com
You've captured the moment beautifully, and exactly how I had envisioned it would happen, immediately following the meld.

The moment Spock entered Kirk's mind (with almost indecent haste, it's been point out elsewhere!), surely it would be a temptation impossible to ignore because the mind and soul of young Kirk is the the same as Spock's long-lost beloved Jim's, and as soon as young Kirk saw the memories and recognised himself and who he had been to this noble Vulcan, it would have been impossible for him to refuse what Spock (and perhaps he, too), so desperately needed. This is a beautiful, painful and poignant piece of writing. Thank you!

Date: 2009-05-22 12:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
You've captured the moment beautifully, and exactly how I had envisioned it would happen, immediately following the meld.

Thank you so much! :)

Date: 2009-05-23 06:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vampyreranger.livejournal.com
I like this a lot. I went to see it for the second time about eight hours ago and I leaned over to my friend when Kirk stumbled away from the mind meld and said, "Doesn't Kirk look like he's just been fucked six ways from Sunday?"

Date: 2009-05-31 12:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
LOL! He so did. Like Spock had been doing dirty things while he was inside Kirk's mind. ;)


Thank you so much!

Date: 2009-05-23 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beck-liz.livejournal.com
Wow, uh, I didn't think I'd actually find this hot, and yet. *applause* Amazing.

Date: 2009-05-31 12:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
hee! Thank you! :)

Date: 2009-05-28 01:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rhaegal.livejournal.com
OMG, I've been searching for Kirk/Spock Prime, and YAY! Because honestly, if a hot young version of your long-dead lover turns up out of nowhere...I cannot believe he didn't at least think about doing this.

Date: 2009-05-31 12:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Heck, I know I would!

Thank you!

Date: 2009-05-28 05:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] waxbean.livejournal.com
nice! and very HOT.

Date: 2009-05-31 12:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2009-05-31 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurabryannan.livejournal.com
Only one word: WOOF!

Date: 2009-06-10 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2009-05-31 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sneezer222.livejournal.com
To find Spock watching, a man he barely, no, always knew.

Fantastic! When I saw the pairing, I was a bit...hesitant. But you won me over quite quickly.

Date: 2009-06-10 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
I admit, it's an odd pairing, but I couldn't resist. *G*

Thank you!

Date: 2009-06-01 01:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elke-tanzer.livejournal.com
asdfjkl;asdfjkl;adsjkfl;

...

Um.

Bravo!

:-)

Date: 2009-06-10 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Heee! Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it. :)
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