FIC: The Wall (MfU)
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keelywolfeThe Wall
by Keelywolfe
Rated: PG (Not NC-17. Sorry. Habit. *G*)
Disclaimer: I do not own these wonderful characters, because if I did, all their episodes would be on DVD by now...but I digress. I also make no money off of them.
Summary: A short story in response to the![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
muncle #6 challenge here.
It's no less than he deserves.
Even though spying was what he did, what he was, and had been for years upon years, it was still his own fault. Curious ears heard many things, useful tidbits to be tucked away for later, tasty little morsels of information. But there was the inevitable flip, the dark side of the peephole and they also heard things that they shouldn't. Curiosity and cats and rabbits down holes, and Illya wanted nothing less than to tumble in after them.
But how was he supposed to have known Napoleon would be on the telephone? He hadn't really meant to listen; he had only come to ask Napoleon what he wanted from room service. It was only a habit to lean against the door, to slow his breathing so it wouldn't be heard. He'd only been trying to be helpful and instead, he learned something new. A tidbit, a morsel. A single word to change the meaning of his private universe.
"Yeah, I'll meet you there." Napoleon's voice was soft with amusement, the subtle edge of flirtation as delicate as lace. Paris was a city for lovers, and it was no surprise that Napoleon, the consummate of lovers, would want to venture out while he could. There was barely a flicker of disappointment in that before his thoughts turned easily to the book he'd been meaning to finish, perhaps at a the coffee shop downstairs rather than spending the entire evening in this stifling hotel room.
It was the word that he almost didn't hear that cracked his looking glass, that shifted the continents and waters of his world. The word that caught on his curious ears just as he would have turned away, shaking his head yet again at one of Napoleon numerous conquests. A word. A name.
"Fine, fine, that'll be great. I'm looking forward to seeing you again, Jean-Pierre." There was no mistaking the dark, sweet seduction in that, the velvet lining of his voice, the tender warmth, and suddenly it was difficult to breathe.
Jean-Pierre.
With one word, the axis shifted, the polar caps melted and Atlantis sank into the sea, Napoleon was going out on one of his many dates but this one was on the other side, through the glass because it was a MAN he was meeting, a man, another man. This wasn't the right world then, because Napoleon was a man for the ladies. Ladies by the dozens, by the hundreds, used and tossed lightly aside as one might a tissue and that was fine, that was acceptable but this...this meant...something else entirely.
A wall that had seemed insurmountable scaled by someone else.
And Illya hadn't even known to try.
Napoleon nearly bumped into him at the door, blinking in surprise to see him standing there.
"Oh, hey, don't order me anything," he said, seeing the menu hanging uselessly from Illya's limp fingers. "Going to meet an old friend." A familiar smile and a wink, and Napoleon walked through the looking glass and out the door.
And Illya, without a white rabbit to lead the way, merely sank into the nearest armchair and didn't say a word.
-finis-
by Keelywolfe
Rated: PG (Not NC-17. Sorry. Habit. *G*)
Disclaimer: I do not own these wonderful characters, because if I did, all their episodes would be on DVD by now...but I digress. I also make no money off of them.
Summary: A short story in response to the
muncle #6 challenge here. It's no less than he deserves.
Even though spying was what he did, what he was, and had been for years upon years, it was still his own fault. Curious ears heard many things, useful tidbits to be tucked away for later, tasty little morsels of information. But there was the inevitable flip, the dark side of the peephole and they also heard things that they shouldn't. Curiosity and cats and rabbits down holes, and Illya wanted nothing less than to tumble in after them.
But how was he supposed to have known Napoleon would be on the telephone? He hadn't really meant to listen; he had only come to ask Napoleon what he wanted from room service. It was only a habit to lean against the door, to slow his breathing so it wouldn't be heard. He'd only been trying to be helpful and instead, he learned something new. A tidbit, a morsel. A single word to change the meaning of his private universe.
"Yeah, I'll meet you there." Napoleon's voice was soft with amusement, the subtle edge of flirtation as delicate as lace. Paris was a city for lovers, and it was no surprise that Napoleon, the consummate of lovers, would want to venture out while he could. There was barely a flicker of disappointment in that before his thoughts turned easily to the book he'd been meaning to finish, perhaps at a the coffee shop downstairs rather than spending the entire evening in this stifling hotel room.
It was the word that he almost didn't hear that cracked his looking glass, that shifted the continents and waters of his world. The word that caught on his curious ears just as he would have turned away, shaking his head yet again at one of Napoleon numerous conquests. A word. A name.
"Fine, fine, that'll be great. I'm looking forward to seeing you again, Jean-Pierre." There was no mistaking the dark, sweet seduction in that, the velvet lining of his voice, the tender warmth, and suddenly it was difficult to breathe.
Jean-Pierre.
With one word, the axis shifted, the polar caps melted and Atlantis sank into the sea, Napoleon was going out on one of his many dates but this one was on the other side, through the glass because it was a MAN he was meeting, a man, another man. This wasn't the right world then, because Napoleon was a man for the ladies. Ladies by the dozens, by the hundreds, used and tossed lightly aside as one might a tissue and that was fine, that was acceptable but this...this meant...something else entirely.
A wall that had seemed insurmountable scaled by someone else.
And Illya hadn't even known to try.
Napoleon nearly bumped into him at the door, blinking in surprise to see him standing there.
"Oh, hey, don't order me anything," he said, seeing the menu hanging uselessly from Illya's limp fingers. "Going to meet an old friend." A familiar smile and a wink, and Napoleon walked through the looking glass and out the door.
And Illya, without a white rabbit to lead the way, merely sank into the nearest armchair and didn't say a word.
-finis-
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Date: 2003-11-15 07:16 pm (UTC)And Illya hadn't even known to try.
Ohhhh. Very very nice!
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Date: 2003-11-16 08:28 pm (UTC)I will show you fear in a handful of dust.
Date: 2003-11-15 07:16 pm (UTC)And that happens to be my favourtie Eliot quote.
"Come in under this red rock / in under the shadow of this red rock--"
I live in the Mojave. Now I'm thinking about deserts and spies, damn you. *g*
Re: I will show you fear in a handful of dust.
Date: 2003-11-16 08:29 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-11-15 09:34 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-11-18 05:23 am (UTC)Anyway, thank you! I'm quite fond of little 'life snapshots.' :)
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Date: 2003-11-15 11:05 pm (UTC)And knowing Napoleon, several someone elses. ;) Time to fetch climbing gear, Illya.
Great snippet, Keely! I only want to be a fly on the wall when Napoleon returns.
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Date: 2003-11-18 05:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-11-15 11:20 pm (UTC)*ahem* Very nice!!
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Date: 2003-11-18 05:24 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-11-16 09:30 pm (UTC)*curious* but what happens when Napolean-the-slut (*G* as I think of him) comes back and Illya confronts him and they argue and have wild monkey sex?
*G* write that ;)
please?
*smooooooooooches*
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Date: 2003-11-18 05:24 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-11-18 08:57 am (UTC)*g* I notice you skimmed over my request.. ;)
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Date: 2003-11-18 03:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-11-18 05:05 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-11-18 05:48 pm (UTC)There's like, sex and stuff. *G* Sex is good, right?
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Date: 2003-11-18 05:50 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-12-15 04:56 pm (UTC)And you're one of the few authors I know who can really get a good effect out of periodic sentences, did you know that? It was a beautiful beginning to your story.
The entire beginning is so beautiful. Your prose is always so poetic, so lyrical, reminiscent of Keats or Eliot with that smooth, flowing rhythm.
Wonderful work.