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Voyeur
by keely




It is impossible not to hear them, soft grunts barely muffled, the gentle slap of flesh against flesh. If it was only that much, he could have ignored, letting his thoughts wander instead to their surroundings, hearing the songs twining within leaf and wind

The scent of it is more difficult, creeping to him slyly, thick tendrils of arousal encircling him, trapping him in heady waves. Sweat, sharp and almost acrid, and such a strange scent it is to him. Elves did not sweat, heat or cold making little difference to them, and the sharp salt scent of it is almost like a memory that he cannot place.

If he turns his head only slightly, he could see them, watch their shapes twisting together as they coupled. Slowly, tonight, and he wonders what new thing Aragorn might be teaching. Aragorn would know he was awake and not begrudge him the sight, and if Boromir did, he was certain to change his mind.

He inhales deeply, almost capturing a taste of it in his mouth, suddenly rich and pungent, the faintest cry carrying to him, shivering in the air, and he does not look.

-finis-

Date: 2003-02-17 08:02 pm (UTC)
lannamichaels: Astronaut Dale Gardner holds up For Sale sign after EVA. (Default)
From: [personal profile] lannamichaels
ooooh. voyeur!Legolas, Exhibitional!Aragorn, and soon Boromir. Your description is amazing; I could almost taste the sex in the air. :) Thanks for this!

Date: 2003-02-18 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
MMmm, kinky men and elves is a tempting thought...

Thank you! ^_^

Date: 2003-02-17 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zortified.livejournal.com
Awwww! Poor Legolas! Er, yea Legolas! Something.

Pervert!

You gonna do kinks for all nine? ;-)

Date: 2003-02-18 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Gah, no! Just the thought of Gandalf naked gives me the heebs!

Yikes.....

Date: 2003-02-17 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loreleif.livejournal.com
Damn, Legolas has a hell of a lot more self-control than I would in that situation!

Love the bit about his reaction to sweat-smell. And just the general, all-around Ar/Bor yum, too. Yum!

You know, you could always add some L/G and make this just perfect.

Date: 2003-02-18 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
i was thinking about Legolas/Gimli....have to see if anything comes of it. Heck, Elf/Dwarf is a kinky in and of itself.... ;)

Date: 2003-02-18 06:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loreleif.livejournal.com
Whee! L/G rules. Also, it rocks hard. Go for it, please!

Date: 2003-02-17 09:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cruisedirector
Am slobbering. And want to do something nice for Legolas like jack him off. Wow.

Date: 2003-02-18 02:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
LOL!

Yeah, poor Legolas. The lonely Elf...

I would have looked. ^_~

Date: 2003-02-17 09:31 pm (UTC)
nigeltde: if trixie could just think hard enough she would undo everything (boromir)
From: [personal profile] nigeltde
Yummy. One of my favourite kinks, portrayed through a sense not usually utilised in voyeurism fics. Nicely done!

Date: 2003-02-18 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Thank you! It's one of my favorite kinks too. ;)

Date: 2003-02-17 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberlynne.livejournal.com
Oh lovely. Such imagery. And HOT, too. ;)

Date: 2003-02-18 02:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2003-02-17 10:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sneezer222.livejournal.com
Keelywolfe! That is wonderful. I could smell it all right with Legolas.

Date: 2003-02-18 02:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
:)

I just like the idea of Legolas knowing exactly what's going on around him, even to the point of getting involved unintentionally.


Mmmm.

Date: 2003-02-17 11:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] telesilla.livejournal.com
*quietly picks Legolas' pocket and checks his wallet*

Yup, he's a card carrying pervert.

Date: 2003-02-18 02:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Heck, he probably has a lifetime platinum membership.

Sick, twisted Elves. *G*

Date: 2003-02-18 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com
"Turn your head! Turn your head, you bloody Elf!"

He inhales deeply, almost capturing a taste of it in his mouth, suddenly rich and pungent, the faintest cry carrying to him, shivering in the air, and he does not look.
Eeep. *falls down*

Date: 2003-02-18 02:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Yeah. I know I would have looked.

Legolas is made of some stern stuff. *G*

Date: 2003-02-18 05:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guntar.livejournal.com
I've said it numerous times before, and now I am going to say it again. Your writing is amazing. I mean, seriously, the descriptions are so utterly vivid, it's like I'm not even reading at all. I don't have to think about envisioning the scene, it's just there. And when I finish, the smell lingers in my mind, so that I can't forget.

Truly, you are a genius.

Date: 2003-02-18 02:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Blush.

Other words fail me, so I'll just say thank you and quietly bask in the glow of your compliments. ^_^

Date: 2003-02-18 05:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luckykitty.livejournal.com
Mmmm. That was so absolutely tangible. Must catch up with all your little fetishy snips... Thank you for sharing!

Date: 2003-02-18 02:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keelywolfe.livejournal.com
Thank you! ^_^

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