Oh Keely. I'm so happy to see more of this. As usual, you totally made my day! ♥
One thing I totally love about this, as well as many installments, is how MUCH you pack into a single story, what with characterization, awesome new details about the Autobot base, and the varied and snappy witticisms of one Sam Witwicky.
I finally nailed down what I enjoy most about your Sam: everything from his POV is so delightfully, subtly snarky, or humorous, or just darn' well putting the 'wit' in Witwicky. (Sorry, I just...couldn't help myself.)
Possessive!Bee took me delightfully off guard. XD I just love that Bee was so decisive and sure of taking what he wanted - then so devastated, after! How could Sam do anything BUT respond to that?
There's three things I can't wait to see from here: how Mikaela deals with the news of their relationship (and whether it really takes her by surprise, heh, she's awfully sharp); aforementioned weird holographic threesome (gee, how's Bee's possessive dynamic going to affect that?); and Sam figuring out how to be a man and reconnect with his parents. XD
Kudos on another marvelous part! Very well worth the wait.
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Date: 2007-09-19 01:53 am (UTC)One thing I totally love about this, as well as many installments, is how MUCH you pack into a single story, what with characterization, awesome new details about the Autobot base, and the varied and snappy witticisms of one Sam Witwicky.
I finally nailed down what I enjoy most about your Sam: everything from his POV is so delightfully, subtly snarky, or humorous, or just darn' well putting the 'wit' in Witwicky. (Sorry, I just...couldn't help myself.)
Possessive!Bee took me delightfully off guard. XD I just love that Bee was so decisive and sure of taking what he wanted - then so devastated, after! How could Sam do anything BUT respond to that?
There's three things I can't wait to see from here: how Mikaela deals with the news of their relationship (and whether it really takes her by surprise, heh, she's awfully sharp); aforementioned weird holographic threesome (gee, how's Bee's possessive dynamic going to affect that?); and Sam figuring out how to be a man and reconnect with his parents. XD
Kudos on another marvelous part! Very well worth the wait.