How did I miss this when you posted it? I’m glad I went hunting for an update.
Well I can breath now. I was wondering how you were going to go with this, but I had no idea that you would have Sirius’ shade be the one who fell through the veil while the actual Sirius was there all along. I really like that idea. And the fact that he didn’t kill Remus, but that should go without saying.
Excellent plot line and I liked the way you wrote the characters, the edginess of Sirius and the seemingly cool Remus in particular. Great story.
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Date: 2006-02-09 02:54 pm (UTC)Well I can breath now. I was wondering how you were going to go with this, but I had no idea that you would have Sirius’ shade be the one who fell through the veil while the actual Sirius was there all along. I really like that idea. And the fact that he didn’t kill Remus, but that should go without saying.
Excellent plot line and I liked the way you wrote the characters, the edginess of Sirius and the seemingly cool Remus in particular. Great story.