Oh my god! I laughed, I cried, I cringed, I… took long breaks to “clean up”. I love this fic, it’s fabulous, it’s wonderful, it’s getting recced in my journal! (which, I hope sends people here, not that anyone actually reads it. Moving on.)
This chapter provided a lovely sense of completion, not only for the fic, but also the entirety of OOTP. I love explanations for Sirius’ behavior and this is a fabulous, especially considering you didn’t undermine his very real insanity.
And, btw. I love Bella! She’s badass.
"Should be obvious. I'm staking my claim. Thought you'd like this better than pissing on your shoes." he whispered back. Bwhahahah!
"You must be the only person in the world." Sirius choked out, still laughing weakly and wiping tears from his eyes, "Who's disappointed to get what he wants." Aww! Remus in a nutshell, yeah?
Remus blinked twice, considering. "I'd like to say that was sort of romantic, but I'm afraid I'm just not Shakespearean enough for that."
"You should be, you have enough of his fucking books."
"Be that as it may, I think I'll settle for a moment of pure terror."
"Gonna scream like a girl?"
"Think I can't make you do it first?"
The banter! The cute! The romance, but still having coherent characters!
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Date: 2006-02-03 04:28 pm (UTC)Oh my god! I laughed, I cried, I cringed, I… took long breaks to “clean up”. I love this fic, it’s fabulous, it’s wonderful, it’s getting recced in my journal! (which, I hope sends people here, not that anyone actually reads it. Moving on.)
This chapter provided a lovely sense of completion, not only for the fic, but also the entirety of OOTP. I love explanations for Sirius’ behavior and this is a fabulous, especially considering you didn’t undermine his very real insanity.
And, btw. I love Bella! She’s badass.
"Should be obvious. I'm staking my claim. Thought you'd like this better than pissing on your shoes." he whispered back.
Bwhahahah!
"You must be the only person in the world." Sirius choked out, still laughing weakly and wiping tears from his eyes, "Who's disappointed to get what he wants."
Aww! Remus in a nutshell, yeah?
Remus blinked twice, considering. "I'd like to say that was sort of romantic, but I'm afraid I'm just not Shakespearean enough for that."
"You should be, you have enough of his fucking books."
"Be that as it may, I think I'll settle for a moment of pure terror."
"Gonna scream like a girl?"
"Think I can't make you do it first?"
The banter! The cute! The romance, but still having coherent characters!
Thank you for this!