keelywolfe

Yay!!! This really was the best week ever!

I really want to quote favorite bits, but there would be far, far too many. I definitely loved the anybody/Mia interaction, again. Some more. And I really liked that Kyle wasn't oblivious, just nervous about Connor's reaction. And the sex was hot, too. *grin*

This though:
sure his eyes were just going to plop out of his head and then they'd probably get asteroid dust on them, which would suck.

I love the way you mixed humor in this the whole way through. It was one of the many things that kept it from being cliche.

Also:
Yes, this was his family. "Fine, I'm going upstairs to have sex and you guys can keep whoring out my preferences to your friends."

"You do that, son," Ollie said absently, then louder. "But only with Kyle!"

Just. YES. That sums up the whole thing for me, somehow. Great family interaction, humor, the promise of sweet sweet love, and witty repartee.

I only hope this series was half as fun for you to write as it was for me to read. Thank you for sharing!