You dashed this off in two hours, and it shows, in a good way. It's fresh and all of one piece, and you have your Tim and Dick down *so* well, they're perfectly themselves. I really envy and admire your characterization of them.
Also, this is just awesomely hot.
Also, I have to change a sex scene I just wrote now, dammit. *grin*
Also, OMG, I love you. *does the happy smut variation on the dance of joy*
*having come back to life, rescuscitated by good smut*
Date: 2005-06-07 12:56 pm (UTC)You dashed this off in two hours, and it shows, in a good way. It's fresh and all of one piece, and you have your Tim and Dick down *so* well, they're perfectly themselves. I really envy and admire your characterization of them.
Also, this is just awesomely hot.
Also, I have to change a sex scene I just wrote now, dammit. *grin*
Also, OMG, I love you. *does the happy smut variation on the dance of joy*