keelywolfe

L's somewhat disappointment in the beginning of this lovely fic when he sees that Raito is not Kira anymore made me wonder: Who is the real Yagami Raito? I mean, Kira IS Raito, a Raito who trailed down the path of murder. Raito, however, is just Kira without the murder and killing and the Death Note. They both have the same intellect, the same smarts, the same precision, and they both could (more than likely) plan ahead twenty paces. So, really, this fic made me wonder: Which Raito is the natural Raito? I wonder what would happen if Good!Raito (to put in broad terms) remembered being Kira, but didn't become Kira? That would be a surprise for L in bed.

Well, now I'm finished with all that deep philosophical stuff that I can't figure out. I shall now finish reviewing your fic:

I loved this series, and this is one of the best endings for a fanfic that I have ever seen. Especially considering that in just the last fic (or was it the 2nd fic in the series?) Raito decides he wants to stay; now, Raito wants to leave but can't. Poor Raito (>.<) You like torturing the poor boy, don't you?

L figuring out which Raito Raito was at the moment, and also his subsequent actions, were absolutely, positively, realistic. And Raito's reactions? Fantastic.

The dialogue in this fic is perhaps the best of the entire series.

I hope you continue writing, keelywolfe, because you are one of the best Death Note authors _ever_.