Augh. Your fics kill me. I love the simplicity of the story and, while I'm not usually a big fan of second person, the you worked really well. One nitpicky detail that really doesn't make any difference at all-- when Raito goes out of the bathroom, I don't think the body would be cooling quite yet. It takes a few hours before it happens. ^^ But it's not important, and gah. I'm still blown away by your Raito. He's gorgeous.
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Date: 2004-08-24 05:44 am (UTC)