Loved your characterization throughout. Great details as well with Jim's muddy knees, his broken Vulcan, the great imagery of the rain. I feel so sad that Spock got a fever and missed seeing Jim, then Jim not remembering him years down the road. Lovely work. Great depiction of Sarek as well. Loved how he put his coat around Spock.
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Date: 2009-07-27 02:10 am (UTC)