Whoa. Just...whoa. I love how this isn't just smut. You incorporate thoughts and motives so well into your writing and still make it extremely sexy. I also agree that Jet needs to be left gasping and writhing as a fitting punishment for being so smug.
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Date: 2009-03-23 05:59 pm (UTC)