This is incredible. Once again, I'm blown away by the vividness of your writing. I loved your description of Boromir's hands, and the smooth transition that they provided from Faramir's earlier thoughts to his latter ones.
Indeed, your writing always has that effortless flow, the introduction of one element, and then using its development to introduce something new. It's so effortless to read, it's so smooth and natural, but you managed to combine three very separate ideas in such a short space. It all melds together so that it seems as though it all belongs together, and only in hindsight is it possible to see the careful construction that allows such an effect.
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Date: 2003-12-29 07:43 pm (UTC)Indeed, your writing always has that effortless flow, the introduction of one element, and then using its development to introduce something new. It's so effortless to read, it's so smooth and natural, but you managed to combine three very separate ideas in such a short space. It all melds together so that it seems as though it all belongs together, and only in hindsight is it possible to see the careful construction that allows such an effect.
Truly, you are a genius.