Date: 2009-02-26 11:45 pm (UTC)
OH. MY. GOD.

*Loves upon you*

That was the sweetest, the BEST ending. And you said there's going to be a sequel?

*Squeel!*

Okay, going from the emotional reaction to the technical one: I really liked the tone of the narration through this last piece. The line, "with a group of Water Tribe warriors waiting with astonishing patience for them to get the heck out of the way so that they could go out with the tide." just seemed so perfect. And the goodbye between Sokka and Hakoda was great, too.

Fire Nation are passionate people. *snort* Well I'm glad that they're not having to sneak around in this universe of yours. The secret would last a whole two to two and a half hours. :)

The sex was very hot, but at the same time very sweet. It read like they were making love, and that was a cool vibe. And Zuko's joke at the end did actually make me laugh. Good job!

Can't wait to see what else you have in store! :D
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