Date: 2009-02-16 11:39 pm (UTC)
You wrote: ", Sokka found that he wasn't as generous as Zuko was, he didn't want to share. Didn't think he could bear it, not when just the thought left his chest tight and his eyes hot".

Well, now Sokka sees it from Zuko's perspective-and he wouldn't allow himself to be as generous as zuko was. i hope sokka realizes what a lucky son of a gun he is_the fire lord running after him; jumping on a boat and proclaiming his love to sokka for all to hear. I was so thinking you wouldn't put just the two of them together_i'm very, very happy that you did. what wonderful miscommunication and misunderstanding on sokka's part--almost threw his chance at love away. yeah for zuko for not allowing that to happen. you did a great job with sokka's pity party-woe is he. you'd think after inserting your penis into another man multiple times-that sokka would have at least talked to zuko before he left_but if he had; we wouldn't have had your wonderful reunion at the docks. since sokka's father is a widower, maybe he and hakoda can find companionship with each other-if they hadn't already discovered it-that would make a nice father/son talk.

you wrote: ""Yeah, do you?" floated down from the docks, a murmuring echo surrounding them. Wonderful, they'd gone from spectators to audience participation."__so, so funny. you fill your stories with multiple emotions and make them all work and all so convincing and a joy to read.

i suppose zuko could father children with concubine_with no emotional attachment. Love that he chose sokka over mai. love that he chose sokka over tradition. loved that he wasn't afraid to shout it out to the world (or everyone at the docks anyways). i'm looking forward to the next chapter in their story_i'm bummed it's going to be the last-but we can't expect you to write the 'never-ending-story'. I hope you have another sokka/zuko project coming up soon. there aren't many stories out there that are written as well as yours. thanks again for taking the time to share your story with us. i'm sure it takes a great amount of your time--and we are fortunate enough to be gifted with your story, time, effort and talent.
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