You know, towards the end it almost seemed written like you would see in a movie... a movie with Meg Ryan and some hot guy, only at the end where they confess their love... wow, that's supposed to be a compliment, btw. What I'm trying to say is that this chapter was extremely well written and manages to stand out in a truck-load of other extremely well written chapters!
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Date: 2009-02-16 04:13 am (UTC)You know, towards the end it almost seemed written like you would see in a movie... a movie with Meg Ryan and some hot guy, only at the end where they confess their love... wow, that's supposed to be a compliment, btw. What I'm trying to say is that this chapter was extremely well written and manages to stand out in a truck-load of other extremely well written chapters!
Can't wait for the next part! :D