WOW! What a brilliantly written chapter. (I didn't comment on all of the previous ones; but they were also very well written and enjoyed). The range of emotions in this chapter really showed your ability to convey emotion in the written word_disappointment, shock, incredulous, lust, love, guilt, passion, comedy, sullen, concussed, etc... You make it very easy for us to feel what the characters feel and to feel for the characters. Thank you for taking the time to write and share your story/stories with us. Every chapter has been a joy to read and I always look forward to the next one.
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momijizukamori
GREAT!
Date: 2009-01-23 08:51 am (UTC)