Okay, I know I've said it numerous times... but you rock. Like.... completely.
Heh. Coherence is overrated, isn't it?
I'm sure my incompetent mumblings caused from the random firings of neurons as my brain spasms are not entirely sane, but they express the absolute magnificence that is your writing rather well.
Just... gyahhhhhhhh.
[Grammar nitpicks:
Legolas murmured. Estel's only answer was a soft, shuddering sigh and the soft flood of warmth against his palm a moment later was it was no surprise
Also:
The stairway theled upstairs to the baths was on the other side of the hall
Also:
The water refreshed him somewhat, crisp and cool and as he waded deeper, [comma splice] Legolas was forced to conceal his surprised at how tall Estel had grown, hardly shorter than Legolas himself was
okay, that's the end of my little grammar-queen ness]
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momijizukamori
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Date: 2003-04-25 09:24 am (UTC)Heh. Coherence is overrated, isn't it?
I'm sure my incompetent mumblings caused from the random firings of neurons as my brain spasms are not entirely sane, but they express the absolute magnificence that is your writing rather well.
Just... gyahhhhhhhh.
[Grammar nitpicks:
Legolas murmured. Estel's only answer was a soft, shuddering sigh and the soft flood of warmth against his palm a moment later was it was no surprise
Also:
The stairway theled upstairs to the baths was on the other side of the hall
Also:
The water refreshed him somewhat, crisp and cool and as he waded deeper, [comma splice] Legolas was forced to conceal his surprised at how tall Estel had grown, hardly shorter than Legolas himself was
okay, that's the end of my little grammar-queen ness]