ext_120128 ([identity profile] betterasalover.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] keelywolfe 2007-10-30 10:55 pm (UTC)

It is kinda a AU to the Human series, but Bumblebee (and sideswipe) act a lot different in this story, than in the human series. Not that that's a bad thing ;)

This was exteremly hot, not that I thought it wouldn't be. Your work is great, you always have the hottest stories, and the best plots.

He couldn't stop, needed the hot pressure of Sideswipe's hand like a drug.

This whole this is hot, but that sentance was so sexy. I could just see sam thrusting into sideswipes hand, needing it, addicted to it, like a drug.

The ending was sexy, hilarious and even had a touch of cuteness at the end. The fact that the whole place had seen them, that's both funny, sexy AND mortifing. Had that been me, I would have died. xD But sadly, I'll never have two very sexy alien robots in holo-form sexing me up.

The small kiss at the end of the story between Sam and Bee was sweet. Bumblebee loves Sam's crotch haha

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