You actually had me convinced you had killed Bumblebee. I was going to track you down and slap you...but I kept reading and got happy things instead ^^

I love how you put some theory behind it and don't just give me crap explanations. Do you have to spend hours pondering silently to come up with such plausable explanations, or do they just come naturally to you?

Sideswipe was fantastic too. The way he reacted to Sam was perfect. A nice touch of humor to an otherwise angsty chapter.

It was all very well written, but it reminded me too much of my own personal experiences so I can't say it was my favorite chapter...