Sideswipe with red hair, eh? Lol! Yup, now he’s Ron. *g* And you know, I know I’m supposed to dislike Sunstreaker, but for some reason I love his grouchy, mean spiritied, issuey ass. Lol! And I love love love possessive Sam. Aww. ;) And woot for some Sam/Sideswipe action. :D I loved reading all of that right there. *nod nod*
Hope you don’t mind, but I found these mistakes once more in the fic and again, thought of pointing them out. :)
Ratchet had called in training
“In” should be “it”, I believe.
wanted it so much, he—"
That last quotation mark shouldn’t be there, I believe. ;)
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Hope you don’t mind, but I found these mistakes once more in the fic and again, thought of pointing them out. :)
Ratchet had called in training
“In” should be “it”, I believe.
wanted it so much, he—"
That last quotation mark shouldn’t be there, I believe. ;)