ext_937: picture of biohazard symbol over red bacteria (Sam Daniel Aww!)
ext_937 ([identity profile] taselby.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] keelywolfe 2007-08-10 02:50 am (UTC)

{{{loves}}} the story, and Bee, and Sam, and Ratchet (OMG! *Ratchet*) here. Bee's POV was deft and wonderfully handled, and all without "humanizing" him too much.

Very fine work here, and I really like the way you handle the hologram/holomatter issues.

*gently encourages you in a non-pressuring-ish way to go write more*
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