Awww, boys. That's much better for both of them. I kind of want to tuck them in and stand outside the door keeping the crazy love interests and supervillains away.

You've got "anime verses American cartoons", which should probably be "versus".

(Does Connor know Shado raped his father? I can't imagine either Shado or Ollie putting it quite that way, although I suppose he could have worked out from the description that it couldn't really have been consensual.)