ext_59977 ([identity profile] jemariel.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] keelywolfe 2006-02-03 10:11 pm (UTC)

bAAAAAAAHHH!! I'm in shock. I'm jealous. I love it. I love you. ::memories:: I love your Sirius and that last scene in Molly's garden, GOD that's cute!! I love their banter.

This all did wrap up quite nicely. I liked that Sirius was a shade *before* he fell. That a stroke of ingenuity. (Forgive my atrocious spelling.)

I still think it maybe ended a wee bit abruptly, but I've certainly seen worse. Seat-of-your-pants writing is like that sometimes.

You deserve hugs and cookies. ::gives you hugs and cookies::

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