I really liked the intimate scene at the beginning, but I loved the breakfast table part. Remus post-coitally perky, Sirius sore and somewhat grumpy- very realistic. Also liked how the subject of Harry came up. It all felt very natural, and flowed easily.
But now I think we've turned up the true mystery of this story - why did the cowboy leave his lady? I guess we'll never find out, what with this Remus/Sirius subplot you're distracted with. ;)
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But now I think we've turned up the true mystery of this story - why did the cowboy leave his lady? I guess we'll never find out, what with this Remus/Sirius subplot you're distracted with. ;)