Ok.

Now i'm REALLY CURIOUS and I am going to have to go back and re-read EVERYTHING.

AGAIN.

Oh, the agony. Can't you hear me screaming from it? Oh oh oh, the sheer agony, please don't make me read it again.

*grin*


Seriously -- that was really intense and VERY cool. And I really really really want to see a prequel and sequel. You can't possibly be nearly done with this!!!

I really like the emotion and energy flow you've got going here!