Well, I had expected to go to bed long ago, not get caught up in your story. I also seem to have skipped some earlier bits, but I'll go back and take them in carefully. You have...a very perceptive way of writing. The characterization was done convincingly and though this is a fanfic it would, or could, have melded in nicely with the actual chapters. That's not really what I meant by perceptive though. Human thoughts and emotions conveyed realistically (painfully so for Raito) is hard to do in a way that doesn't overstep or over describe things. Because we can't really see into other people's heads among writers there tends to be an overcompensation. I didn't get that from yours. It was neither inane or layered with pointless, uncessary details. I rather liked it and thought you handled it beautifully. Thanks for the good read.