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Two steps on the water... ([personal profile] aughoti) wrote in [personal profile] keelywolfe 2011-06-17 04:55 am (UTC)

Holy crap...!! This is a fantastic chapter. (How is it that you keep getting BETTER?). Ratchet's reaction to the battle and his desperation to save everyone he can was just heartbreaking.

Can't wait to see what happens with the twins; I want so badly for it to turn out all right (that the melding brings them some sort of stability and peace) but there are so many ways that it could go horrifically wrong...

And it looks like Sam picked up a bit more than a few receptors from the Allspark... They're all going to freak out, aren't they? Great job establishing the atmosphere for that scene, too.

Thank you such a fantastic series!


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