ext_120156 ([identity profile] sinjah.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] keelywolfe 2007-04-13 12:09 pm (UTC)

Brilliant!

I think this might be my favorite part from the door series (not counting the sex parts XD because teh best smex is in the third part ::winks::). I especially like the L/Raito dialogue, when they talk about their motives for sleeping together. It's just so... in-character, I guess. Quiet, and so much like L and Raito, and so amazingly contrasting with the passion and power and force of the sex that follows.

Overall, amazing work!

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