Rattyfleef ([identity profile] rattyfleef.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] keelywolfe 2010-03-05 01:34 am (UTC)

ARGH no no no, where's my happy ending?! *claws at the screen*

XD

This is *excellent* and all in character and <3!

Favourite lines:


If the cobbler's children always went barefoot, then a ship's doctor never got a sick day.

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take it back out to puzzle over when he was feeling a little less like the underside of a whorehouse rug.

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equal parts piss and vinegar

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words escaping him like a spring flood
-- I love how you always bring his past into the narrative like this.

But yes. Woohoo!

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