Y'know... when you said you were gonna use certain words, I was all prepared to not like the story but read it anyway cause I think you are a good writer and worth reading (at least once!) when I dont like something about the story. And I really don't like vulgarity in a story, I don't think it's needed and I tend to think it cheapens and ruins the story.

Truth -- I don't think yer story needed the vulgarity here, either, despite the fact that it was the whole point of the story..... But need it or not, I've already read it twice and as soon as I finish this comment I'm gonna go back and read it again. So... so there!

Wow. Nice.

Res